Wednesday, 13 May 2009
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The Separation
I've been very busy lately and have not had a lot of time to comment other people's sites much. For that I'm sorry. I'll be back to normal soon.
I wrote something called Wait for Me a while back and I guess this might be a sequel. The inspiration is the same as before. If you have not read it, I would suggest you do so first.
It concerns when God's love leaves, but again parallels the unconditional love of a man for a woman.
There's nothing I would not do for you, my love, my fair one, no good thing ever denied you if only you would wait. That was all, yet you so swiftly move to stir my jealous anger, for you have left your course to chase some far smaller, far dimmer wandering star, unworthy of a single thought of yours, as you only ever thought of yourself, and as I only ever thought of you.
You would discard all the best there is for some worthless momentary pleasure, returning to an ignoble past, the one to which I said never to return, that it can only end in your regret. And ever though you no longer speak to me, yet will I wait for you with only ever as much patience as you need because I know you are worth the wait.
You will see your need for me soon enough, and when you do, I’ll be here with open arms. No matter how often you nail me to this cross, I will forgive you, because I know that you know not what you do. You may feel some guilt for these scars of love I bare. Perhaps then you will see my worth.
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Comments (6)
Awww that was so lovely, so very touching. I loved reading that, beautiful. "yet will I wait for you with only ever as much patience as you need because I know you are worth the wait." that line really touched me and made me think about God and His love. You are a great writer.
These are some very good thoughts.
This was beautiful but yet, equally as heart-wrenching.
Beautiful and I can see it pretty clearly from both perspectives (God / humankind and man / woman.) It actually reminds me of the book of Hosea and then the fictional take off of that, "Redeeming Love," by Francine Rivers. Hm... Still, I liked how you expressed all this... poignant.
@no1charmerlondon - @SarahLynn_violin - @Veiled_Reverie - @Passionflwr86 - Thank you; I really don't know what else to say, except that I'm a little overwhelmed. If I have anything I need to work on, I guess it's accepting compliments.